er..

Author: Mihir /

Eyes are open
could be wider

Living a life
could be larger

Have a feeling
could be stronger

Can see the end
could be nearer

All i whisper
could be louder

Time i spent
could be better

This is all
what it Matter



2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Gosh! This one begins like a crisp morning and ends at the tomb. In my personal opinion feels like a ailing old man regretting on his death bed and you name a poem like that "er..." read your poems well before putting an appropriate title.

-Windsor Jr.

5 July 2009 at 06:34
Mihir said...

@ Windsor Jr. - Thanks for your comments. The regret of the "error" in the life time by the "old man" is described, so came up with title as "er..."

5 July 2009 at 08:53

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